Shy Bottom Maid

The vision of Akine has the right amount of shading, but her outfit looks a little too shiny. Apron is too flat.

The originality of <img class="avatar" width="50" height="50" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/i/d…" alt="" title="Dimensional-Expander" />'s character is well-detailed, for example, the frills on her outfit and panties.

What brings out the most in this piece is how Akine's shiny maid outfit attracts the eye, rather than the shiny red background.

What I would improve though, is the colouring of the eyes. The eyes should have a gradient to them. And also the hair needs more shading as it looks flat. The clothes should have an amount of stretch marks.